Hmm.
I liked the ambient graphics, the concept, and the music. However, I kept finding little things throughout the movie that were annoying.
The descriptive writing on the script could have been much better. It could have easily been refined and augmented the piece.
The voice acting was off in my opinion. I noted the voice style was intended to add to the feeling of the story, but some parts you dragged the words out a bit too much for me. Also reading the not-so-well written narration made the voice acting almost unbearable. It really negated any seriousness that might have existed. I closed it about 45 seconds into watching the movie the first time, but I decided to give it another shot because of the reviews.
The ending was good, but pulled off in a cliche fashion. If there was some unique execution, it could have been phenomenal.
And if everyone else hasn't told you this, Red Riding Hood on the cover of the book is spelled wrong. Since it was such a blatant mistake, I couldn't take the story seriously.
Overall, good job. I hope this review will be some help in your future endeavors.