If only
you had made the song.
You didn't give credit where credit is due.
And this Flash didn't really have too much of a plot.
I'm not really too impressed with it and so it gets a 5.
Somethings to work on:
- Animation
- Sound sync
- A plot for the song
And give credit to the people who made the song.
I saw it on another website before this was even conceived.
You must be crazy. I have no idea how to credit these guys anymore. I quote myself in commentary:
"EDIT: Okay, people dont seem to be understanding that I am not the audio artist. If you want the artist and their credits, go here. http://www.fpsbanana.com
/?section=viewitem.sound
s
.sounds.main.193 I dont need anyone calling me Eric Bauman right now."
also the end of the flash states the individual people, im also stating to everyone that says they are impressed that i made the audio that i did NOT make the audio.
what else can I possible do?
Decent, but awfully repetitive
I won't evaluate the sound score much since it's not even yours, though I'd merely say it's a good compilation of sounds. Excessively looped, maybe, but not too shabby.
The video, on the other hand, needs a lot of work. We see the same three or four sequences being repeated ad nauseaum, which only creates a feeling of dread at the thought that it'll just never end. The fact that the music loops 'til the bitter end doesn't and shouldn't ever mean that your animation is equally reused. Be inventive, and do not find yourself restricted by the soundtrack.
Stick figures a la Xiao Xiao are by now rather overused and outdated, and I am also a bit weary of seeing so many vectorised weaponry that simply doesn't match the style used in the background or the character design. The aesthetics are too schizoid for my visual palate.
And finally, I don't see the point in the marksman sniping his teammates every single time. It's distracting.
- Golb
its actually not 3 or four sequences. no sequence other then the dude getting shot is looped more than like 10 times. And yes of course I was restricted by the soundtrack how could I not be.
Also, I find it odd you give a movie such a deep review, which as first I enjoyed until I saw you have made not a single movie.
I can also tell you dont have experiance with flash because if you did you would know my style of animation is NOTHING like Zhu's Xiao Xiao series.
And the TKing was to touch the hearts of agitated CS viewers.
Yeah i know its repetative, but I already got that review over 300 times so far. but really, thanks for the review! And not just putting in a half assed 2 second "ZOMG it is teh bor1ng blammdd!"
nice, except
It repeated WAY TOO MUCH. I know you could have thought of better ways to keep us entertained. AND why was the CT with the AWP killing his own team mate?? (Over and over again too so I had time to be irritated by it) ???Wtf?
Repetative. yeah I get that alot....
I did the TKing awper on purpose.... EVERYONe seems to bring that up...
well
Making a song out of CS noises is pretty cool, but you didn't make it and as a flash, this was pretty boring and repetitive. As an audio this would deserve a high score, but sorry, that's the only good thing about this.
Maybe you ought to review the audio then http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/74020
cs
hmmm not the best cs sound ive heard yet...think u have to put in voices like "go go go" or "fire in the hole" ...
There was, "Okay let's go" Does that count?