Somewhat Flawed
I really only have two problems.
1. Spelling- I would suggest you run spell check on any text before submitting something. The commentary at the end spelt "absolutely" wrong. Also there are some errors in your comentary on the NG page.
2. Repeated visuals- I kind of liked the effect, but the problem lies in the fact that with so many sounds playing at once the action portrayed gets overwhelmed by the other sounds going on. Thats not really a problem in your animating exactly, except when I see the visual and can no longer pick out the sound associated with it then it because annoying.
Beyond that I liked it. Ovbiously, the graphics could be improved from stick figures a bit, but generally I didn't mind.