Decent.
Decent animation, I felt the style was a bit too a la paintshop, but with some reflection, it goes well with the style of the music. However, to be honest, it really isnt anything to write home about.
Upon reading all of the reviews for this submission, some people may be inclined to say that the author takes criticism too personally. He is clearly a talented flash artist, but could certaintly benefit from looking deeper into the constructive side of reviews and comments.
I could benefit from that if there actually WAS constructive criticism to look at, rather than simple "not good enough", "didn't make my day", "could've been better", etc. etc.
For the last time. I don't mind knowing that i could've done better. What i hate is that you don't re-inforce your argument. Tell me what exactly could've been better and perhaps i might listen to you. I take it personally when you don't give a shit and simply write short responses without a shard of actual constructive criticism. I received threes and fours before and the ones that actually told me what i could've improved on weren't snarled at. Unfortunately for you, you didn';t take the time to give me a more appropriate response. Moreover you didn't study your "case material" well enough and wound up shooting yourself in the foot like the ones before you.
Give me your opinion but remember to add "why", not just "that's that".
i'm speachless
Idea: this flash desers to start a new colection, ng tributes, other than that, your graphics need work and a fue minor detalis could be pated out
True... Quite a few details actually. Graphics will always keep improving but for now they ain't all that good :(
As for the rest i'm already working on it.
Thanks for the feedback!
It was an alright submission.
It was an alright submission to watch, it had a catchy little nice song to it which made it fun to watch, but the only thing that really let it down was the lack of animaation, most of it was just still, with a very small animation piece going on. Also when it repeated itself it got a little boring seeing the same old clips recycled, perhaps you could have came up with some new ones.
Lots Of Love, Rebecca Rose
Thanks, Rebecca. And for the last time, you repeated what everyone else said. I know it's a major flaw and i promise i won't do it again.
peace out!
you the rat
thid is old. but it good i dont know if you are stil here but its very god
I'm still here, and thanks for that. I promise i'll make an effort to come back on Newgrounds to animate at some point.
liked it
very cool, i liked it
A great idea that came from a great song. No rocket science involved