Original
There was no violence and it was not very funny, but it was still a great flash. It reminds me of older style cartoons like Rocky and bullwinkle mixed with some Dr. seuss. As far as the normal content on newgrounds this is very original. You could make other flash that deal with poems that might be a little more exciting, like more jokes or violence, but dont compromise your ideas. Very nice flash.
Erm thanks... I think lol Why is violence so necessary? Thanks for all the nice comments you made. I guess im just not a violent person
Very Special!
Excellent flow and very clever. As some people said they much prefer to get violence and kick ass humor! But u should feel satisfied with that piece of work! Work on the sound for a clearer flow. And you have such a good talent so work on the plot of your animations. But otherwise good job!!
Awww thank you!
Hmm
Not for my tastes. And why's that? Because the average newgrounds user probably isn't 6 years old. I'm not sure who you were trying to appeal to in this movie.
I was trying to appeal to me, thats why I made it!
you dreamed this?
That was funny and clever. The only thing that I didn't like about it was the narrating voice. Without the subtitles, I wouldn't know half of what was said.
Yes I hate my voice too lol Yeah its v bad I know, Im rubbish at the sound but I am improving. I was sort of drifting off to sleep when I dreamt a portion of the poem and for some reason I had to wake up grab a pen and write it down. And thats the result. Yes Im a nutter. Thanks for your nice comments
Great Flash
This was terribly funny, and the flash style was eye catching. Better voices may have helped. Good job