not too shabby
I liked it. Not as much as Pawn Shop Prick, that was really hysterical, but this was nice. I'll be waiting for the next version with the better sound because as many have already stated, it was quite horrid in this one. Overall though, a job well done!
YES!!
I coulod tell you to make the overal quality of your short better but it really doesn't matter. Your sence of twisted humour in this is awesome! The insanity just kept gettgin more intense! i thought it was over when he woke up but got happily suprised. Good job. I hope you will make more of this wonder! ....maybe make the sound better... or not!
Potential
A first rate random violence flash. Why the low overall score? Because there are dozens upon dozens of random violence flashes around. This one succeeded in what it set out to do, but it definitely didn't shatter any molds.
Graphics: Outside of a few iffy frames in the very beginning of the flash, the movement was fluid and sweet. The characters themselves seemed kind of wobbly, though.
Style: First rate in its archetype.
Sound: All the appropriate off-the-shelf sound effects. ^^
Violence: Ahem.
Humor: This is a personal reason for the low score. It's just been done many many times before, and isn't that funny to begin with.
Overall: A little graphic cleanup and an original premise (or even a premise executed in a creative way) will allow you to claim a spot as one of the better flash artists around.
This rocks on so many levels.
I'm a very random person, and this was somewhat nice to see. This hsit was fucking random, and I love it. The animation was cool too. You sir rock.
great
it well rockes i liked the random acts of violence lol
:D i hope you make more soon it kiks ass