Meh...
Right in the middle... You've almost got it.
First of, I haven't seen anything else of yours.
Second, I didn't really find it all that funny.
Alright. I found several things either annoying or novelty.
Annoying: The sidekick unicorns were WAY too repetative and the squeaky voice got on my nerves.
The Drawings weren't up to par with the sound. You could probably do better if you try.
Good: The Candy song was well done. Good effects, but could be better.
Ending had me chuckling.
Breakdown of the score:
Graphics:5:Drawings/mouths could be better.
Style:9:Original, slightly humorous, and very well planned out.
Sound:3: UNGH! THE SQUEAKYNESS!!!! X0!!
Humor:3: Ending
Overall:4: There are better, there are worse. Practise and you'll be great!
I give ya a big w00t for the effort! Nice try! :)