cute
hmm... cute
the only prob is that when the guy truns his head, it looks like it's rotating, mostly becaue you made it go up first. (it looks like his head flips). Pretty good though
Reviews for "Clam by the bus"
Nice!
I enjoyed. One could say it was too short, but it suits it just fine. Great style to it. Only suggestion I could make, it doesn't need the <--mum. Just the Mums Rock is enough of an explanation.
Keep up the good work!
LaserKarl responds:
Ah. Youre right, it would have given it a better end :)
Thanks!
pretty good
that entry was pretty good, and pretty funny. It reminds us all of our moms, and I liked the animation. Keep up the good work.
short and sweet
You know, it was good for what it was. Although it is very short as other people pointed out, for its length it was fun. Sometimes simplicity is best :)
I thought the higher frame rate worked very well for this, and the more minimal, detailed animations added a lot to it. The shading seemed a bit overboard, so maybe lay off that a bit next time.
Don't let the overall score of this review get you down - it was very good, but when scored on the same scale as the many lengthier cartoons on here, that is only fair. So basically the biggest improvement for next time that I can tell ya is lengthen it, enrich it with maybe a real story. Good for what it was though - short and sweet! Keep it up :)
((( CUTE SHORT )))
~~REVIEW~~
Well this was a cute short, but it also loops you may want to fix that with a stop action code, but as for the animation it was funny good graphics and was very smooth flowing very welldone, just needs to be longer and have a preloader or something...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see... You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...
~~OVERALL~~
Short very short infact but neat graphics and such...
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