lol
Very nice...it's true, it had potential as a normal kind of flash, but the way you made it end was pretty cool.
I suggest you raise the volume up at that last scene, so that the end part makes more of an effect. And make that same last scene a tad longer...it was too short to firmly grab hold of the viewers.
Again, ver nice. I hope to see more of your work, be it "normal" or be it more like this one