I dont know what to say.
I'm not gunna have a go at you for choosing a topic of tht nature, so instead I will congratulate a successful song - well constructed with a great feeling of flow and organisation. It worked well. The voice was good. The sounds were a good blend and variety. The visuals worked well with the whole object of the piece. It was in addition quite clever. To improve, I guess a more tasteful theme might gain more fans.