This flash was Amazing.
The drawings and the water effects were amazing. It was like the stuff you see in Pixar animation movies. The sound effects were fantastic and the background music wasn't too overbearing.
The storyline worked well... and it was actually kind of funny. I wish there was something I could tell you you needed work on... which is the whole point of reviewing, but honestly, I can't think of anything!
Great job with this flash animation!