You have potential, but you waste it on this.
First and foremost, I can tell you put a lot of devotion toward the animation in your movies. And, I love the Bitey character. He appeals to me, for some reason. However, everything else is so...empty. There is literally no storyline whatsoever. Not only that, but this plotless mess is so unecessarily drawn out to the point where you begin to just blankly stare at the screen, waiting for a moment that didn't seem like the last.
The voice acting is also very annoying, and quite repetitive. Leave the roaring to Chewbacca. Nice music though, although I hate how epic music starts to play 2 seconds after a punchline (in this case, Bitey getting hit with a rock). It makes no coherant sense. In certain parts, the music fits perfectly, but in others, that epic, Lord of the Rings-esc music makes little to no sense.
Speaking of which, I'd love to see you make something similar to Lord of the Rings, an epic fantasy movie, with an actual, albeit less drawn out plot. Yes, that would be truly great. This, though...this is just great effort put towards fancy animation and nothing else.