A great work, but is it....funny?
I have noticed a lot of people calling this a masterpiece. I would call this a great work in terms of graphics, but for it to be classified as a funny cartoon and be....as it is pushes the envelope. Please let me state this: the graphics are stellar, the best I've ever seen. The characters are pretty cool guys, and I do notice a story, at least somewhat of one. My main issues were that this story is not very easy to notice, I had to think about the cartoon and watch it again before I understood the entire story. I also did not like the "humor" part of it. This is classified as a funny cartoon, but I honestly see a lot less humor than story. The part near the end with the boulders has been used in other cartoons and stuff before, so although that scene is funny it isn't AS funny because of its overuse. I am seriously looking forward to the next part, and I hope that you don't take my criticisms too hardly, they are merely the little points I'd like to see worked out. Toss in a few new funny moments, play with the story a bit, and I can guarantee you a 10 from me for part 2. Good job nonetheless!