Such quality!
The graphics are amazing. The style is brilliant, the music is perfect - it's all such high quality goodness!
The only bad point I can think of, is that the story could be a little clearer. Maybe more text to explain things. But I'm sure the major features of the storyline will come clearer in part two - which I will definatly be watching when it's finished.
Overall it has to be the most high quality flash I've ever seen here at Newgrounds. Keep up the amazing work. I'm very impressed.