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For me I think this is towards to the more of the youngfolk I thought the jokes were a little premature, but that's my idea. I do agree that you are a very good artist and musician this is better than your last post here at Newgrounds I give you a 7 cause of the humor and that if it was a little bit shorter, because this is not a series so you can make the flash a little shorter than others, but that is decesion not mine it was good but not great. The real challenge for you would try to attract all audinces young and more of the older audiences.