Very well done.
I just want to review it and say that I've seen a lot of reviews for this saying there's no plot but in fact it has more plot than most submissions on NG.
Think about it. The littlefoot is seperated from it's mother in the beginning and it's wandering around representing innocence.
Then the scene with that flower/ toad/ frog/ bird thing that ate the fly was to protray the dangers lurking in Brackenwood because even though it looks beautiful, looks can be deceiving.
Then Bitey comes and scares littlefoot, mom comes and saves him, bitey is pissed and throws dirt at her, she throws huge rock back then he turns and sees littlefoot picking up little rock to throw with patch in the grass. He looks up and jumps, avoiding the big one, then is KO by the little rock, things find him.
Pt.2 is coming.
Enough of a plot for you???