Graphics are good but...
I know how long this animation must have taken you so i am not going to be to harsh on what i am saying (not that i am intending to be). I thought the graphics of this masterpiece flowed nicely, very well done. The scene was set very well with the music and vibrant backgrounds and the charecters were very original.
However, this type of style is not really my sort of thing. I usually go on the internet to find information or things that ammuses me. This piece although with small bits of humour and suspense did not. I think that you have a great skill as a flash animator (you should be a profesional if not already) but I would prefer a more comical/ thrilling aproach. Also i would like to point out that graphics/ special effects are becoming less important today in entertainment (this is being seen in the videogames industry and in the film e.g. Napoleon Dynamite worked on a very low budget) it is all about the scipt an content.
This piece is not worthy for the internet. It is only worthy for an art gallery or artistic film. But as I did not really like the script I am not going to rate this as high as other reviews. Sorry.
Yeebles
P.S. i would also like to point out to other reviewers not to rate just on graphics but rate on the content.