A pinch of this, a touch of that... it worked. ;)
I enjoyed this much more than Yuyu. The creature designs were interesting (and some quite cute ;x), as well as the story being much better at crafting what your world would feel like, and the purpose of the characters. Also, you added a touch of hilarity, which worked surprisingly well with the ethereal fantasy-like flow. Good work with this one! d(^^)b