hmm
I rather liked the animation style, and the smoking oven in the background was well done, but.... I kept waiting for something big to happen and it never did. I mean yes there was a fire but it was kind of low key like the rest of the animation. My thoughts are that this would have been much better if something explosive had happened, and this could have been done in this animation without much alteration except to the sound. If you had made the fire more noticable and had used sounds that more caught a person's attention this would have been a far better flash. What I mean is that when the building caught on fire it was sort of quiet like the rest of the animation. With this being the pivotal moment it seemed to be I think it should have been more attention grabbing. Just my two cents.