Reviews for Crebe Episode One

[Dream-of-Duke]

The preloader is the best part of the moive.

The preloader is the best part of the moive, I really like it. The moive itself is decent, but it is not one of the best that I have seen. I mean, your moives' style is a bit old school. If you can try some new style (for example: 3D), it will give you a much higher score since the graphics will be superb. In addition, one of the most important ways of getting a high score is to be special. What I am saying is that the moive should have a fresh storyline that other peole normally do not come up with. Of course, humor is always good and you may consider adding it. In general, your moive is quite decent, but there is a room for improvement. I hope that your moives will be better in the future.

[TheDevilMyself]

Sonic 2: Return of the Jedi(?)

Ok, it was a bit better than your average sprite animation except for one small thing:

FPS

Make your FPS higher, because nobody wants to watch teleporting sprites. We all know it's the easiest form of animation in the world (except if you made sprites from stick figures... but then i guess at least they'd be your own creations) So we expect more out of a sprite based movie.

The text in the jungle part goes a little too fast in the middle. Slow it down a bit. Speed up the rest though, and try doing a couple of zooms and different camera shots - more effects! Otherwise those first two sequences get a bit tedious (especially the send one)

Overall i think it's obvious that you've got some potential with this, so keep at it!

D

PS - i like what you did with the lightsabers - looked like it actually belonged there! Congrats!

Skeik responds:

im soirry dude, i think the preloader doesnt work. The fps is 24, so they should be looking nice. Rewatch it and let iut load a while.

[Nomader]

Confusing at parts, but a fine submission

Alright, I'll admit - I find Sonic with lightsabers as funny as hell.... XD

Only problem is, what was going on? Suddenly some of them end in a jungle, Knuckles sort of just appeared, Sonic's just going "back and forth"... It was all so confusing... :/

Anyhow, the graphics were fine - nice work!

Skeik responds:

ya gotta finish sonic 3 to understand that part. That thing he goes through changes gravity. Next one, ill explain things.

[DonutMaster]

It was alright

It was pretty good. Some problems with the sound on the menu though. Also, the quality changer in options didn't work for me. And the text on some parts went WAY to fast.

Skeik responds:

Ill fix the voices.

[King-Kill-33]

It's allright

Animation is quite good, no doubt about that but somehow the story wasn't really gripping me. Anyway it's a good flash and it will definetely be better.

Skeik responds:

Ill make the next one more story oreinted