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^^Good Points^^
Though I never found anything too sexual about those commercials, every time I see it from now on I will think of nothing but the little animals biting off the dudes wiener. I like how you conducted the end, it got the point across very well with the guys twitching eyes, but actually never showed the biting, which was good.
^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were pretty poor. Your backgrounds were just gradients. You should have at least done some nature type background, if for nothing more than to make this appear nicer. The sound quality was pretty low too.