This is my review, its long.. so take your time.
This is another animation that tries to hard to be in the “random chaos” theme. You know the kind, the one that tries to be in the same category as Don Hertzfeldt “Rejected” or David Firths Ptikobj. I happen to be a fan of both animators and commend them for making content in this theme without being totally stupid and unentertaining. But this is no David Firth animation, not at all… Or is it? I am pretty convinced that Jerry Jackson is really David playing a little prank on us… Yes, when he is bored he makes these VERY crappy animations and put them under “jerrys” name. If so, good job David! You fooled a lot of us, if not… Then why the hell you even giving this guy (who happens to sound so much like you BUT have no talent) any publicity? Is he related to you? Did you promise his dying father you would share your internet fame with him? Or is this just a prank you playing on the INCREDIBLY simple minded users of NewGrounds? Which ever the case I did not find this at all entertaining. And it looks like the author of this animation actually WROTE the D00d Dictionary I once in a while use to communicate with the simple of mind.
This is the actual description of the Animation:
Quote:
DIS IS MY CART22N 4 U. FANKS TO EVYONE HOO IS GIVIN ME MAD PROPZ COS IT MAIKS IT ALLS WORTWILE. DIS IS A TRUE STORI LINKEN PARK REILLY DID CUM 2 MY HOUSE.
IF U BLAMM DIS U R GAY . PLZ GIV IT A CHANCE U MITE LIEK IT!
/End Quote.
Ok lets break down this description, first of all there is so many typos that I cant even believe this guy survived this long in modern society. Second there is no way some guy that substitutes the proper word Come for the word CUM is going to call me gay because I do not like his pathetic cartoon. I in fact did give it a chance, I still did not like it. Get over it! Anyways, here is my review:
Venomous Criticism Corner:
To random, to stupid, Linkin Park and to much crap… Next…
Constructive Criticism Corner:
Your are lucky you got a friend like David (if infact you are not David) because I actually like ALMOST all his animations, they may not be pretty to look at but they are affective and entertaining (although dark and creepy at times). I suggest that you develop your own style and maybe you could actually go places. Other than that.. do not continue with this style, Don and David do it so much better.