good
pretty good, it was really funny when they went to zelda world ... but short
good
pretty good, it was really funny when they went to zelda world ... but short
meh
It's been said but if you went back, edited the spelling and grammar it'd be great, it's actually funny otherwise.
its ok
it was kanda too short but not bad and u might want to work on spelling a little.
short
fucking short but nice story
is good but
it need to be longer
not bad