bad grammar
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bad grammar
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hey
nice job
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best movie ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please make the second part!!!!!! =D
you need to go to school
beside the fact that this video was short it had the most gramer errors ever. to the creator i say make it longer and plain better.
ps listen to your ela teacher
Text goes by too slowly
The beginning took so long, I mean, I read the entire text and waited at least 10 seconds before the animation continued, maybe you could make it go a little faster, I know there might be some slow readers but try to make sure the faster readers don't suffer by waiting for the next text to appear