Not bad
" You're the saviour! You are one of a number of people who have helped keep this entry in the Portal!" I think you did an ok job on that. Keep up the good work. However for future if you do anything with that sort of BG(the woom) instead of making it look scratchy with all the brush lines going back and forth, i'd try to so somthing else.
Ok...
I think the style was pretty good. Make more like it, but please pick a better subject matter.
How many dead babies does it take to paint a house?
Depends on how hard you throw them.
Its... Okay.
Its quite sad at the end, but, its okay though
WHY!!!!
So sad...
Misguided
I remember this old thing. It was... poignant. But not exactly true to life.
Heartbeat and nervous system or not, the early fetus is not a sentient being. Not at all.
Never would have imagined you were so pro-life