Reviews for Autumn Tree

[Nickolai-Karpathia]

Lord Have Mercy On Their Souls

Events like these always give me a sordid chuckle, but mostly after the fact. Whenever these things happen, the first thing everyone do is point fingers. Nobody wants deal with it or try to prevent it, they just stick it on scapegoats and let them deal with it. With human nature like that, were all natural born killers.

With evnts like Columbine and WTC, it is proven everytime that there is a God. A God who has given humans the most powerful ability in life -- FREE WILL. People need to realize that God doesn't allow bad things to happen because he's an unkind God, people do bad things because they choose to. Just as I have chosen to write this review. I don't have to, but I choose to.

If one was to wish for ALL the bad people in the world to disappear, humankind would cease to exist. That is the downside to free will: If we have the choice to do good things, we have the same freedom to do bad things. Free Will is an uninterferable right and there is nothing we can do to change it.

Shit happens.

[heids]

hmm

you missed the part of them going bowling before the incident. It's good. I'd call it based on the shooting.

[Wyld-Style]

Touugh Subject

Pretty powerful stuff

[ImperialChrono]

Good flash

It was a good rendering of the Colubine shootings. The graphics weren't the best and either was the anumation, but it was still pretty good.

I believe that whole, "Do you believe in God?" thing was a rumour that was debunked.

[NoNameTheOrc]

Skillfully done.....

Good job, but it did seem to lighten up the fact of what these kids did, almost seeming like you were trying to present a justification. No matter what was done wrongly to these kids, their wrongful actions were much worse. Murder never equals alienation, and I know how it feels to be severely alienated. Nevertheless, very impressive.

One thing to add, you may want to do a little touch up editing to the Author's Comments. Simple things like on the 2nd sentence, may want to change the word "were" to "was" being that it is used singularly, "uncomprehendable" isn't a word, you want "incomprehensible."

Grammar in the introduction is so important when presenting a serious work.