It had potental
It really had potental but the humor was real dry, and the one kid said fuck and faggot too much.
Reviews for "Scary School: Episode 0"
TurboBadger responds:
Thanks. Yet another reason why I hate this script. I never should of used it. -_-
Needs work
I can see where you're going with this, but it's not perfect for a first episode. Your animation and graphics kick all kids of asses, but your pacing was slow, the voicework wasn't anything special and the script wasn't too funny.
But hey, you gotta start somewhere, right? Just keep in mind the mistakes with this toon and keep that nice artstyle with you and you'll be alright.
TurboBadger responds:
Thanks. This wasnt the planned first episode. The first episode was originally going to be an awesome creation.
Everyone I showed the script loved it. But like i stated earlier, things happened.
And I really disliked this script but I was rushed into it and to get them to shut up I just worked on it. And the reason why the jokes wernt funny is they wernt made by me.
Most all jokes in here were by my friends.
Thanks for the comments. Later.
Bruce Campbell was right. your toons are shit.
it was like watching a really,really bad South Park rip-off. Wich i suppose is exactly what it was.
Trey parker is funny, and you my friend, are no Trey Parker.
TurboBadger responds:
Thanks.
pritty good
the credit's before the preloader brilliant saves so much time
but the voices were a little slow andthe plot was hard to follow but i still thought it was good good job
TurboBadger responds:
Thanks. Yeah the voices suck. Gotta kick people in the head next time and tell them how to do it.
The voices are slow because I had a problem with the file so they ended up having to be events.
The second ones plot is much better and face past.
not bad...room for improvement...
cartoon and graphics are okay...but you need to imporve on your story telling skills...too much time elapses between intro and plot and is kinda slow...You must deliver the plot early and quickly...Pop Pop Pop...
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TurboBadger responds:
Yes thats one main reason I dont like this script. But everyone was rushing me and shit so I just popped this into Episode 0.
The script for the first Ep. gets right into it with a much better humor.