It's alright
Some of the animation isn't the best, and you could've created your own background instead of putting a filter one a background cell from the series. The voices weren't that good either. Inuyashas was terrible, and Kagomes wasn't the best either. Try going for their original voices, not the english dubbed one. No one likes Richard Coxs voice for Inuyasha, so don't try and aim for that voice of him. Other than that, it was okay, a bit too short though, and not making the best of sense. Try harder next time.
-Master