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^^Good Points^^
The graphics were the best part about this. You drew very well. Your characters had definition and were three dimensional. I liked how you added small animations, like the one dudes eyes constantly moving.
^^Needs Improving^^
This really wasn't what I expected. The guy comes up and screams in a very annoying fashion and then walks away. I would have liked this better had it had something happen at the end. The way you ended this was just lame.