hmmm
Would have been much better if you opted for an art style that hasn't been beaten into the ground enough already. There are a thousand-too-many anime flashes out there but this is one I gatta give a "mediocre" reveiw as oppossed to a zero just because of the way you did it. Wish people would start exploring their own unique artistic abilities before taking the anime route. I gatta say good job though just because of how you pulled it off.