A change of pace
I've enjoyed watching the story so far, and you've left them in such places that I can't wait to see what happens next. Your brother seems to be a kind man that loved his younger sister.
It's nice to see something different than the usual Newgrounds fare, and I can see that you've worked hard on this. Keep up the flash, and good luck with part 3. :)
Nice thing to do.
Hey its me Draco, I wrote a review for part 1 and I say that this is a nice thing your doing for you brother. I have some advice: Dont let the people who say that this flash sucks bother you. They are only trying to beat you down. I had some expierences myself once on an online game. But I didn't let them bother me. I may be wrong about them but who knows anyway? Anyhoo, the flash wasn't 100% great but that doesn't matter. The important thing is what your doing for your bro. I bet he's looking down on you from Heaven and smiling at all the wonderful things your doing for him. Well, least your brother is in a better place now. I mean did you ever hear the rumors? They say you can eats tons of food and never get fat. Awsome! *Cough* Sorry, just trying to make you cheer up. I'm having a rough time with depression right now and a lot of problems with my stomach. So, I'm not a bucket full of laughs eaither. I give my support so good luck! Best wishes- Draco.
Much improvement
I think you are making great strides in your cartoons. Also, the way you portray your story from your point of view gives the viewer a special view through your eyes. I think you are doing a fantastic job and will be waiting for your next episode. Your brother seems like a great guy wish there were more people like him. Keep up the good work!
I liked it
I thought it was good and very sweet of you to dedicate something like this to your brother. Also, yes you weren't kidding when you said quite a few reviewers said you were feeling sorry for yourself and said unfunny, insensitive shit like "ha ha your brother died". All I have to say to that is Newgrounds will always be Newgrounds in the fact that there are a lot of assholes who will say the most random offensive thing just to get some kind of fame by setting a few people off. Don't ever let a thing like that deter you from making art. You're such a good person and you've shown that your brother was as well. I'm very sorry for your loss, but just remember that one more person out there enjoyed this.
Sorry For the Score
However once again, judgeing this solely as a random "Newgrounds Flash", I simply didnt like it, the graphics were better than the last, and i made it through more of this one than the last, But once agin it bored me, it was slow progressing, and at 3 in the mornig could put me to sleep. I'm hopeing you will move on to other subject matter and offer newgrounds users the quality content I know you are cappible of. I am not blaming your movie or be-littleing your loss. But I also do not feel i'm being overly harsh. But I'm sure sum @$$hole will say I am.