Nice
First off, extra credit for a unique preloader. Quite hot.
Even though the graphics probably could have used a lot of work, and this was kind of run-of-the-mill in terms oof first submissions, it's better than a lot of stuff I've seen. The highlight is definitely your dancing flame... that's some good quality stuff. This could definitely use some improvement, but not in a bad way. It's pretty good as it is.