An Interesting Short
I am unfamiliar with Richard Cheese, so I am not sure how much better of an interpretation this could possibly have been, but I will rate the flash for it's overall value to me despite unfamiliarity with the core or inspiration of it. Clearly the graphics are fresh and cartoony and smooth, if not slightly unoriginal. The sound was good, liked the muffledness of the screams once he left the studio. However, I think it would have been fitting for the protagonist to have not been visible during the muffled audio, so as to leave some room for the viewer to fill in the blank as to what was going on during his violent outburst. The violent outburst of Richard (I assume that's who he is) was sort of slow and would have had a better impact if it had been unseen. But this is just my two cents. I am sure that the director did what he thought best. Overall this was a good short, but I'm not absolutley mad about it like I am about say, Charlie The Unicorn. But keep up the good work, I am sure there is more quality to come.