Good for a first
Nice sprite animation, but it was too short. I won't hold that against you because it's your first flash, but you do have room for improvement. It needed to be a little faster paced, and some actual voices would be nice instead of ones found in video games. The movement of the sprites and the sound synching was great, but some of the jokes I didn't find funny. Overall, great sprite animation for the first time, but you know what you need to improve.
Grade: B-
Thank you for the review. And you know, you are right. I know I can improve. the second sprite flash movie i've been working on already has many little improvments. So by the looks of it, the next one should be better, and hopefuly longer.
A pretty cool sprite
~The good~
This was a very cool little sprite flash. They moved very smoothly and I enjoyed the clear backgrounds. The music was did good to the mario name, it fit right into this flash. The sound effacts were put in exeptionally well, the jumping sound and bomb sounds were in synche with the movements perfectly.
~The bad~
No voiceover, so there were a couple parts where it was very quiet and it got pretty dull with no sound or music. Also, a better plot, more in-depth plot would've been cool, in this they just seemed they were fighting pointlessly, and Mario was randomly in the Bower Mobile. Some more action would've also been cool.
Overall, a pretty cool sprite flash that really didn't get the recognition it deserves. I hope this review was helpful!
4/5
I know what you mean about it being akwardly quiet at times. I'm now working on perfecting the use of certain music clips to avoid that. Thanks for the tip
As for the story, I'll be honest.
They were fighting pointlessly. XD
But I was aware of that since the start. I never intended it to be a flash movie for NG but in the end I made it one. Hopefully my next movie will have a more intresting plot to it.
Thanks for the review.
Pretty Cool
Looks like one of those flashes attached to a forward. Not like a bad way, but so that its so funny, you want to show your friends. Im a big Mario and Luigi fan so thats a plus. I liked the sounds to, were they you or the game? I couldnt help but laugh when I saw that Bowser got jacked. That was the funniest part in the movie and overall I think this was a cool funny short and I would like to see more shorts by you.
Yeast
-Review Request-
Thank you. I will work on making some more "shorts" and some longer flashes as well in the future.
Hope to see a review by you one day.
It was alright.
I would have liked this better if this was longer, or funnier but I guess the outtakes redeemed yourself on the funny. Overall it was pretty good.
advice
change it so the text is like in the old mario games, new text in this kind of movie looks a bit ghey. good job though, try making it longer and have more cool moves and dodges and stuff, like super mario reloaded (check it out)
thank's, i'll be sure to try and change that.