don't be so humble
Why do you think the animation is lame? It's some of the best I've seen here on NG. I didn't notice any of the so-called "errors", the story itself was orginal and quite funny too. Many kudos.
My only suggestion would be more sound effects, and the ending kinda leaves you hanging
HaHa
That was great.
finally.. something good...
it's been a while since I've seen a GOOD new entry, keep up the good work...
Haha
That was great, I loved your animation and drawing style. It was really unique and my only tip is to make the loading screen better, it gave me an impression that it was going to be a crappy movie (which it wasn't of course). But yeah, great flash.
HAHAHA! You cracku me uppu!
That was very cool man, I got a good laff at school, XD