Nice.
So I read "fight but no blood" and I was like "Whaa-- fighting without blood!? Does that happen?" But it turned out pretty good. It kept me entertained, it was funny how everyone prolly expects the pole swirl to happen. I expected to see some kids in a sandbox in the end or something to that effect, saying that it was all in their heads or whatever, you know. But yeah, I liked it. I'd like to see more of your work, which I will now check out.