um, no......
rule of thumb.... voice volume must always supercede background volume... I couldn't hear anything... sure raising the volume on my speakers helps but then I also raise the volume of the already loud background music. So in short the whole skit was lost on me - sorry. Great job for one day on graphics...but in all honesty I would prefer you spent a day fine tuning this and I believe you would have a much better flash.
Peace-