nice
if you keep this up, you'll be front page
Reviews for "Do Us Part"
that's pretty sad... ;_;
Both touching and depressing little story, the way she wants to kill herself to be with him, yet his spirit literally protects her... very interesting concept...
Creepy
Nice work. Should have been on that Beond Belief:Fact or Fiction show I think
Alright
It was alright i liked it but it could use some inprovmeents
loved it
somethin i woulda done sad too very..... i wish i coulda done that 2 save my girl