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Maybe it's just because of lack of sleep and allergies, but tears formed in my eyes. The animation quality could use improvement, but this was still very beautiful and touching.
Reviews for "Do Us Part"
This made me think of someone in my class...
There's a girl in my class who admires me, and she is so nice and intelligent, but everyone bullies her... After watching the movie, I wonder if she felt the same as the woman in the movie...
But if you're being bullied, there's no way out... The darkness of the tunnel will drown you for the rest of your scholarship... The reason I say "No way out" is that suicide is a mortal sin and you will be sent to hell for it... Hey, that gives me an idea. I might make a flash about that. I might call it.... Hmm.... Nah, I can't think of a name. Anyway, good,good work.
A real display of talent.
This is quality work. The majority of flash artists simply lack a sense of composition and mood; this seems to come naturally for you. Keep up the fine level of sophistication and ambiance, and you'll get great things going in the future.
Interesting
Nice flash, good first full show...
Alittle confussing at first but none the less very nice...made sence in the end.
Surreal and connected
you created a fine flash- use of music was perfect as well as maintaining a sense of direction to the story... each act more desperate than the next. My only beef is that you had to explain the razorblade event; even I was a bit confused as to how that happened... the sound wasn't too much of a clue and I was more focused on her face than the sound. Granted though a "ghostly wedding ring" would have killed the suspense you were maintining... tricky section that might need a bit more work to lessen the confusion On a personal level it has touched me like many others. Sadly some people care less for emotions and thats really their problem, not yours so don't sweat it. Again you did a great job and look forward to more work from you. By the by I emailed this link to a few friends who were equally impressed.
peace-