my throat is tightened now...
very sad. Excellent job on the emotion level.
Reviews for "Do Us Part"
Surreal and connected
you created a fine flash- use of music was perfect as well as maintaining a sense of direction to the story... each act more desperate than the next. My only beef is that you had to explain the razorblade event; even I was a bit confused as to how that happened... the sound wasn't too much of a clue and I was more focused on her face than the sound. Granted though a "ghostly wedding ring" would have killed the suspense you were maintining... tricky section that might need a bit more work to lessen the confusion On a personal level it has touched me like many others. Sadly some people care less for emotions and thats really their problem, not yours so don't sweat it. Again you did a great job and look forward to more work from you. By the by I emailed this link to a few friends who were equally impressed.
peace-
Very...nice.
When I first read the description of this movie, I thought "Great, more emo bullshit."
But this was very well done. There was a real sense of helplessness and then you see why she cannot relieve herself of this helplessness. Artistic and very well executed, the music was very serene and peaceful, which conflicted nicely with what you sensed was happening in the characters head.
The only thing that confused me was that she was able to smash a mirror to bits wth an empty plastic pill bottle. That's a helluva arm there.
i dident understand it ?
the quatity of animation and music was veary good i jest dident understand what it was about
Beautiful
It seemed short to me, but, it was truely beautiful. I loved how the arms coiled around her as she was falling, and the wedding picture as the ending. Great job.