Reviews for Do Us Part

[Chris-Aldin]

Nice work.

Nice story...presented very well. You actually came up with a good name for your flash,which is hard to say aboout most that i see. I was touched and at the same time sad........you got the mood across perfectly.
Awesome graphics, except i felt there could have been a little more animation. Nice sound effects and good choice of music. Both the sounds and the music were high quality.

Just overall it was very good. Once again try to animate a little more, rather than just draw. Either way , very nice job. 5/5

[Emerada]

Wow ;-;

It brought tears to my eyes. Very nice work, the music you picked fit very well with the theme being used. It does give new meaning to 'till death do we part' as charlie_005 said. You have real potential there, and some real skill to portray feelings and emotions. You keep up the great work, we all now wait with baited breath for your next work ^^ (see what you just started?)

[Grevener]

Just... wow

A lot of feeling was put into this flash, i could tell weather it happened to you or a friend, it was very nicely done. True fact is it happens to a lot of females out there.Good job

[0peth]

Good but make a play button instead of restarting

The goth/suicide idea was'nt the most original but that does'nt mean it's not a great flash idea.THis flash was well done. I always read over other people's review's and it seemed they didnt noe to laugh or cry. I have nothing against goths and the music ownz like slayer, atreyu,good charlette. well those are the best ones to me. For your first flash it was really good and reading responses i seen you felt that people should'nt trash flash if they never made one. Well I don't understand. I never made a flash but I can tell what's a good flash. I agree with that we shouldnt be so literal to a good flash but also if some one rayes low there's always excuse from everybody to make the reviewer look like an ass so people will ignore the bad and listen to the ass kissing reviews eh o well but i dont care if u dont agree with this review i have the balls to say wtf is going on.Lol uh good flash

[PithyGriff]

Intelligent, creative, brilliant

It's really rare to find something that shows true creativity and intelligence.

The metaphoric situations are brilliantly done. Subtly artistic, it isn't so obvious that it gives everything away. Absolutely loved it. Certainly not the same cliche emotional/serious crap that you usually see people making. Deserves an 11 for style.

Regrettably, the sound wasn't as good as it could have been. In the immediate beginning the sound was fine (the bottle openning was great) but later on it was sorely lacking. My overall rating is always the same as the style, but sound is so important that I couldn't give the 10.

The shortness is part of the beauty, but it feels like something is missing. Something possibly could have been added, if it fitted as well artistically. Another attempt at suicide would seem too repetative, but maybe a scene emphasizing the woman's loneliness/pain.

Ugh, so good, so good. A woman wants to die after her husband's death but can't bring herself to do it because of his love for her. Beautiful and original. (Well, the idea can't be completely original, but I've never seen anyone base any work on it.)

I sincerely hope you'll remake this with a little more sound and a little more length.