Nice work.
Nice story...presented very well. You actually came up with a good name for your flash,which is hard to say aboout most that i see. I was touched and at the same time sad........you got the mood across perfectly.
Awesome graphics, except i felt there could have been a little more animation. Nice sound effects and good choice of music. Both the sounds and the music were high quality.
Just overall it was very good. Once again try to animate a little more, rather than just draw. Either way , very nice job. 5/5