You have the ability to make this not suck.
Cliche late to work scene as well as the cliche angry boss.
Poor character development.
Work on your spelling and grammar. If English isn't your first language you could easily ask someone to check your grammar for you.
Lack of a story as well as unexplainable events leave me with no desire to watch a sequel.
Poor voice acting along with poorly placed subtitles.
Dear god this is awful!
This made first page?
The animation was good overall, seems very choppy though. The beginning bit made me laugh at all you pathetic people who find this rubbish the highlight of animation. Heaving anime girl fighting monster thingy, starts crying because thats what females do right? Cry, go "oh!" all the time and grow angel wings several times a series. This is so tired, it even had a fwuffy heart at the beginning didn't it? Cute, but I've seen it all before, about a dozen times or more.
Then... "NowDays" lol, learn to spell. The guy came on, another fwuffy heart on the floor and in some really cheesy voice, "I'm a cop"... It was too much, I wanted to carry on watching so I could write a fuller review, but it just sucked too much.
Good effort, but not to my tastes, perhaps if you get someone else to write your plots for you it would be better.
sorry dude didnt cut it
hey man i dont get it theres a chick ball of light then it goes to a cop then at the very end it says its time their has to be a sequel well their was definently a love feeling their well didnt cut it but nice try dude ill look at some of ur other sstuff
i like it:)
in the start, that song is wonderfull;) cose im a children of bodom fan:D
and that song is Children Of Bodom - Lake Bodom (very good song):) ceep ur the good work:)
Listen holmes.
The opening combat sequence was very well done, and thus talent can be found in this artist. However the rest of the movie seemed to drag on, and I ended up telling myself mexican jokes instead of paying attention to the second half. I suppose that this part is where you furthered the plot, but seeing as how long it takes you to put out flash, you might want to consider putting in more combat and less story.