good job
but please for the love of all things your love in this world get some better voices those were worse than being shot in the head and coming back to life and shot in the head again for several hours,but everything else was great
Reviews for "Valhalla Knights"
good but...
it doesnt have enough vikings at this point. Also by valhalla kinight do you mean a valkyrie?
More me want more
I like it. The story has got me hooked and you followed up with some pretty impresive grahpics to boot. Good work
Excited to see where it goes.
my experience
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I've probably watched this maybe 4 times, and each time I always think that it's just the fighting - just an action sequence - and then I see the rest. This time I remembered though, as it's not been long since I last saw it. But I wonder if anyone closed it during your 'credits' at what is the start of the movie.
selected aspects (rated from ----- to +++++)
(note: I'm not rating everything or trying to break the flash up into constituent parts. Just indicating how much each adds to/detracts from my enjoyment of this.)
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++: Some nice graphics. The flips and spins at the start looked great. All artwork was fantastic.
-: In the intro, some of the backgrounds (specially the wall and the table) sit kinda uneasily with the rest of the animation.
--: Some animation for the more subtle movements (i.e. in the intro when she kinda shifts before she darts away, Wolf's nodding head)
-: The first guy Ken walks past in the station looks kinda incongruous with everything else.
+++: Lovely use of silhouettes in the death scene
++: and I really like the ghost walking away there.
++++: Well suited music throughout.
--: Ken losing his job for being late seems a bit far fetched.
--: The whole 'cop who does stuff his own way' is a bit cliche.
--: We don't really have a handle on Ken by the end of this.
overall
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As it is, Ken isn't as interesting a character as he could be, and we're uncertain of his motivations.
I'm rating this as if you'd never make another episode. A lot of set-up here and the series has yet to fully pull itself out of cliche land.
My favourite part was probably the death-bed scene. Whilst I wasn't too keen on the voice for the younger ken, the graphics you used, combined with the music, tugged at my heart strings.
I do think you did a brilliant job of setting up the series and I eagerly await episode 2. This has the potential to be an awesome series.
I would have gave this a 10 but....
You need to lay low on the breasts. Your art skills are proffessional but the constant female breasts showing in your flash movies isn't.