That was excellent!
the last guy was a nOOb who has no life, you're great at flash
Reviews for "Valhalla Knights"
More.. Please?
I liked it alot.. it kept me wanting more.. I do hope you do more of this...
This has potential...
But it needs to be realized. Overall this is one of the best anime-esque animations on NG today. It is very close to perfection, but you need to tweak a few things. First off, the main heroine will inevitably throw most anime fans to look at Belldandy from AH! My Goddess. It's hard to say that because we have yet to see much of her personality, but I'm just sayiing make sure to downplay that reference. Secondly, You need to tweak the main hero alot. For starters, his voice is far too muffled, get better equpiment and hire someone with a voice that can be both serious and funny. Right now the voice doesnt seem to match his personality; it's too serious, sounds like he is trying to sound like Vien Diesel when that really isnt hi character (the funny scene establishes that he has his silly times, you need to find a voice that can reflect that well). In terms of his appearance, tweeeaak. Loose the ponytail and the black wifebater, both are FARR too american-action-movie for this type of animation, and just make it look tacky. I was worried about that the most in your movie, the presence of cleches. Your not putting them in in rampant numbers like other NG artists here, just make sure you dont fall into that all to common trap. Have the main guys hair get cut by a sword or something in the next episode and make him change his attire into something more personality-defining; you need to make your character look a little more recognizable and clothing and hair are both the biggest mediums for this in the anime world. Give him his own style, dont rip somebody elses. Now on to items. I'm assuming that cross-like thing is actually the hilt of a sword or something, because if it's a cross it makes NO sense to cross christianity/catholisism with Norse mythology; the beliefs are just too far apart. If it is a hilt of a sword, make sure to put some artistic uniqueness to that as well, dont just make it a cleche broadsword that has "magic powers." Thats just tacky. The item, little heart thing, I'd redo it. The clear effect is nice and all, but the item itself doesnt really have alot of recognizability, it's a red heart with little wings, looks more like a Disney World trinket then a vessel of a Goddess. If you got that idea from Yugioh or something then I suggest studying those series to better understand how item-unqiueness downplays bland design. I know im coming down hard on you, but I do that because I see alot of potential in this.
quite good
I liked it. It gives a very good base on which our imagination can build its own story. If there is a sequel I hope that it'll be this good.
not bad
good animation, but i think i missed what the plot was