Animation was great...
The rest was lacking though. The story was kinda cliche'd.
Reviews for "Valhalla Knights"
Not bad..
I like your drawing style.
I also like the backgrounds and little 3D-things that you do.
The problem is: The two do not really fit together, characters and background. Your animation ist great, but that's the one thing that kinda bothered my while watching this flash. There's a slight disharmony in all the graphics.
That's what lowers the rating. That, and the average voice acting.
You got a huge amount of talent though. Keep it up.
good character animation, spotty artwork and sound
the character animation, especially in the intro sequence, was extremely well done. it's easy to tell you paid careful attention to detail with it...but the rest of the flash suffers from an obvious lack of attention. the backgrounds, especially with the textures in the intro, were pretty atrocious. the camera work was annoying, and the speaking was hard to hear over the "soft" background music. also, why did the main character have an accent when his father didn't? also, the sudden change of mood from the driving to being greeted at work to getting yelled at to remembering his father was a bit awkward.
you have a great deal of talent, but this flash feels very unmastered. a simple turning up of the sound for the voice (or turning down of the music), and more attention to background detail would really bring this to life.
What should I say.......?
Thats it?Man,that was way short.Was it the file size or something?Anyways...It was kind of funny on some parts but this made completley no sence and was to damn short.The 2nd intro had nothing to do with anything,This flash was a good flash but I cant
say you did good if Its that short,you barley gave enough time to introduce the characters and set the plot.If your gonna make a sequel then make it long.Now coming to the good sides.....It had good Graphics,the style is...Original.The humor was OK because it was good humor but there was barely any of it,only like one scene with what is at least remotley humor,and the sound was also Ok,It isnt good,or bad,its OK.Violence was cool because it wasnt overdone or had blood in it aor anything like BRUTAL killings or-you know what I mean......Interactivity Ill give you a three.Ill give you a three because it had a preloader an intro and an end and a replay button.Well on overall I have to say.......Good job and keep it up and make a sequel and make it better and longer and make it so it makes more sence!Thank you. -Tornado_Clock
i know a way to make this better!
at the main begining replace the evil old guy with a chick and make them cool whip wrestle!