It was good but im gona go into detail
Ok that was a good flash but it was so short it made me cry its a good flash and has potential, your down points are interactivity and the sound, i like fighting scenes but the way you did leaves me thinking that she is being hit by nothing don't get me wrong i knew she was getting hit by something but thats the feeling you gave with it. Sound was ok but could use work and maby have the people your working with act it out better. Graphics were amazing compared to what i usualy see on ng just fine tune it and youll be gold.
All in all good plot and good flash im looking forward to seeing a sequal with this.