GJ!!!
The sound wasn't that bad, subtitles were alright and writings in the background were fine (nothing too interesting, but it's always nice to find a few Easter eggs).
The graphics were awesome; I could point only to 3-5 places where you slipped a bit. For example in the opening shot every layer moved independently.
For some reason sexual insinuations in the fight scene felt a bit forced, like you tried to integrate them into the sequence.
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Did Ken get fired? Him saying that he'd better find another job seemed to go against the story line up to that point. You know after going to such length to show Ken's reasons for becoming a cop, him giving up police work so easily seemed unlikely at the very least.
Anyway this was excellent flash, can't wait for the sequel :-)