Speech.less.
Very nicely done. The smoothness lacked a bit, but your talent more than compensates. I marked down a little because of the misspellings. The originality of your piece is quite refreshing. You've done your job when people are waiting on the edge of their seats to see what happens next :). Can't wait for the rest of this story.
hereswhat iu think
okay im an actual animator and im gonna say what i think here, first of pretty good but, the opening flash back was a about 10 seconds to long, the story is great and the animation was pretty good, so no probs there, i didnt thin the main characters voices suited him. you have the making of a pretty good serial here, and id liek to say im eagorly awaiing more of it. keep up the good work, but do something about those spelling errors. keep at it your doing good
Well...
I actually kind of agree with the last guy. It's not enough for me anymore if a movie has amazing graphics (which this one does, in spades). It needs a hook, and this doesn't have one. Kind of shows how superficial a lot of voters are on this site.
That's not a dig at you, because you deserved to win something just for the great animating.
Good
I thought the first scene with the girl had a bit too many gratuitous cleavage and panty shots, but other than that, it was freakin awesome. Some of it looked like it was actually in 3D though, like the table she slides across. Was that actually in flash?
Alright!
This was quite enjoyable, Your a pretty god animator, While there is still room for improvement, That was probably one of the best anime animations out there.