This was awesome
Don't listen to the dumbasses like LetItBreakThrough74, this was an amazing piece of work. The story was NOT poorly written, it was just short. Which is perfectly fine for a teaser video like this. Remember the Fallen Angel Teaser? That didn't have much story to it, but it was an AWESOME flash video, just like this one. Also, this video was only "stereotypical" in the anime-style animation, which is NOT a bad thing, it's a good thing. Anyone who can make flash video like this deserves the right to draw in whatever style they choose without some asshole telling him it's wrong. This submission definitely earned its place on the Top 50 list.
The only thing I would recommend is going back through the video and correcting some spelling mistakes. "Through" was spelled "Trough", and "Now Day" should be "Now a Days" or even "Present Day". But I am seriously envious of your talent. Please be sure to continue this series and your "The Real Legend" series.